Rough Cut:

This is a rough cut of our final thriller opening, we need to add another shot of a death list, which will develop the narrative further and intrigue the audience. This will mean we will get a higher grade as we are thinking of our target audience and the overall pace of our opening. We have also developed the opening, so that it leads into a narrative, we feel this shot will interest the audience and lead into the following scene well. We are going to make our titles appear in a far more attractive manner, which will add to the delivery of our opening. We have worked on the teachers and target audince feedback to make sure we are developing our opening to maxium level.

This is our rough cut some specific changes will be made to add to the delivery of our opening.