Teacher Feedback:

Feedback on Opening so far:

The teacher feedback we received was that our editing needed to be smoother and we needed to slow down the pace of the opening, by adding a POV of Luke to add to the tension and suspense and slow down the death. Also we need to add a shot of Callum, POV, to slow down the pace. The cut of Callum holding Sam needs to be quicker and briefer so the audience understand the narrative. 

Another piece of feedback we received was not to have the cuts of the dead bodies in the basement instead to have the camera panning over the bodies in the specific area of death at the end of the opening with the titles fading into the black screen.

We also need to add some dramatic music to add to the tension and suspense and build up the atmosphere, which we need to research to find a particular piece that works well with our opening.